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№ | Criteria for assessing the answer to task C1 | Points |
I |
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K1 |
Formulation of source text problems |
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The examinee (in one form or another in any part of the essay) correctly formulated one of the problems of the source text. There are no factual errors related to the understanding and formulation of the problem |
1 | |
The examinee was unable to correctly formulate any of the problems in the source text. |
0 | |
K2 |
Commentary on the formulated problem of the source text |
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The problem formulated by the examinee is commented on based on the source text. The examinee gave at least 2 examples from the text read that are important for understanding the problem. |
3 | |
The problem formulated by the examinee is commented on based on the source text. The examinee gave 1 example from the text read, important for understanding the problem. |
2 | |
The text problem formulated by the examinee is commented on based on the source text, But the examinee did not give a single example from the read text that was important for understanding the problem, or There was one factual error in the commentary related to understanding the problem in the source text |
1 | |
The problem formulated by the examinee was not commented on. or commented without reference to the source text, or there is more than one factual error in the commentary related to understanding the source text, or another commented, |
0 | |
K3 |
Reflection of the position of the author of the source text |
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The examinee correctly formulated the position of the author (narrator) of the source text on the commented problem. |
1 | |
The position of the author of the source text by the examinee is formulated incorrectly, or the position of the author of the source text is not formulated |
0 | |
K4 |
Argumentation by the examinee of his own opinion on the problem |
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The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave at least 2 arguments, one of which was taken from fiction, journalistic or scientific literature) |
3 | |
The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave at least 2 arguments, based on knowledge, life experience), or provided only 1 argument from fiction, journalistic or scientific literature |
2 | |
The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave 1 argument), relying on knowledge and life experience |
1 | |
The examinee formulated his opinion on the problem posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the author’s position), but did not provide arguments, or the examinee’s opinion is stated only formally (for example: “I agree / disagree with the author”), or the examinee's opinion is not reflected in the work at all |
0 | |
II |
Speech design of the essay |
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K5 |
Semantic integrity, speech coherence and consistency of presentation |
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The work of the examinee is characterized by semantic integrity, verbal coherence and consistency of presentation: |
2 | |
The work of the examinee is characterized by semantic integrity, coherence and consistency of presentation, |
1 | |
The examinee’s work reveals a communicative intent, But more than one logical error was made, and/or there are two cases of violation of paragraph division of the text |
0 | |
K6 |
Accuracy and expressiveness of speech |
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The work of the examinee is characterized by the accuracy of expression of thoughts and the variety of grammatical structure of speech. *The examinee receives the highest score for this criterion only if highest mark obtained by criterion K10 |
2 | |
The work of the examinee is characterized by the accuracy of expression of thoughts, But the monotony of the grammatical structure of speech can be traced, or the work of the examinee is characterized by a variety of grammatical structure of speech, But there are violations of the accuracy of expression of thoughts |
1 | |
The work of the examinee is characterized by a poor vocabulary and monotony of grammatical structure of speech | 0 | |
III |
Literacy |
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K7 |
Compliance with spelling standards |
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no spelling errors (or 1 minor error) | 3 | |
no more than 2 mistakes were made | 2 | |
3-4 mistakes were made | 1 | |
more than 4 mistakes were made |
0 | |
K8 |
Compliance with punctuation standards |
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no punctuation errors (or 1 minor error) | 3 | |
1-3 mistakes were made | 2 | |
4-5 mistakes were made | 1 | |
more than 5 mistakes were made |
0 | |
K9 |
Compliance with language norms |
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grammatical errors No | 2 | |
1-2 mistakes were made | 1 | |
more than 2 mistakes were made |
0 | |
K10 |
Compliance with speech norms |
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no more than 1 speech error was made | 2 | |
2-3 mistakes were made | 1 | |
more than 3 mistakes were made |
0 | |
K11 |
Compliance with ethical standards |
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there are no ethical errors in the work | 1 | |
ethical mistakes were made (1 or more) |
0 | |
K12. |
Maintain factual accuracy in background material |
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there are no factual errors in the background material | 1 | |
there were factual errors (1 or more) in the background material |
0 | |
Maximum number of points for all written work (K1-K12) | 24 |
When assessing literacy (K7-K10), the length of the essay should be taken into account 1.
1. The assessment standards indicated in the table are developed for essays of 150-300 words 2.
2. If the essay contains less than 70 words, then such work is not counted and is scored 0 points, the task is considered uncompleted.
When evaluating an essay ranging from 70 to 150 words, the number of permissible errors four types(K7-K10) decreases.
2 points according to these criteria are given in the following cases:
K7 - there are no spelling errors (or one minor mistake was made);
K8 - there are no punctuation errors (or one minor error was made). 1 point according to these criteria is given in the following cases:
K7 - no more than two mistakes were made;
K8 - one to three mistakes were made;
K9 - no grammatical errors;
K10 - no more than one speech error was made.
The highest score according to criteria K7-K12 is not given for work ranging from 70 to 150 words.
If the essay is a retelling or completely rewritten of the original text without any comments, then such work in all aspects of the test (K1-K12) is graded 0 points.
If the work, which is a rewrite or retelling of the original text, contains fragments of text
the examinee, then the test takes into account only the number of words that belong to the examinee.
Work written without reference to the text read (not based on this text) is not graded.
1 When counting words, both independent and auxiliary parts of speech are taken into account.
Any sequence of words written without a space is counted (for example, “still” is one word, “still” is two words). Initials with a surname are considered one word (for example, “M.Yu. Lermontov” is one word). Any other symbols, in particular numbers, are not taken into account when calculating (for example, “5 years” - one word, “five years” - two
words).
2 If the essay contains partially or completely rewritten by the examinee the text of the review of task 24 and/or information about the author of the text, then the volume of such work is determined without taking into account the text of the review and/or information about the author of the text.
In accordance with the Procedure for conducting state final certification for educational programs average general education(Order of the Ministry of Education and Science of Russia dated December 26, 2013 No. 1400 was registered by the Ministry of Justice of Russia on February 3, 2014 No. 31205)
"61. Based on the results of the first and second checks, experts independently assign points for each answer to the tasks of the Unified State Examination paper with a detailed answer...
62. If there is a significant discrepancy in the scores given by two experts, a third check is assigned. A significant discrepancy in scores is defined in the assessment criteria for the relevant academic subject.
The expert carrying out the third check is provided with information about the scores assigned by the experts who previously checked the examination work.”
In the Unified State Examination in the Russian language 2017, 25 tasks are assessed, of which 24 are tests, and 25 are essays based on the text. Today in test tasks it is necessary to either write down the words correctly (and not just find them), or find two correct answers from those proposed (task 1 and 15), or name the numbers indicating the correct placement of commas. Task 7 remains difficult, where you need to correlate erroneous sentences with the rules according to which the errors were made.
1 point for a correct answer, 0 points for an incorrect answer |
From 0 to 2 points |
From 0 to 4 points |
From 0 to 5 points |
For correct completion of tasks 2–6, 8–14, 16–23 the examinee |
For completing tasks 1 and 15, you can score from 0 to 2 points. |
For completing task 24, you can score from 0 to 4 points. Faithful |
For completing task 7, you can score from 0 to 5 points. Faithful |
Maximum points |
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Minimum points |
Points |
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Formulation of source text problems |
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The examinee (in one form or another) correctly formulated one of the problems of the source text. There are no factual errors related to the understanding and formulation of the problem. |
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The examinee was unable to correctly formulate any of the problems in the source text. |
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Commentary on the formulated problem of the source text |
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The problem formulated by the examinee is commented on. There are no factual errors related to understanding the source text in the comments. |
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The problem formulated by the examinee is commented on, no more than 1 factual error was made in the comments related to understanding the source text. |
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The problem formulated by the examinee was not commented on, more than 1 factual error was made in the comments related to understanding the source text, another problem not formulated by the examinee was commented on, a simple retelling of the text or its fragment is given as a commentary, A large fragment of the source text is quoted as comments. |
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The examinee correctly formulated the position of the author (narrator) of the source text on the commented problem. There are no factual errors related to understanding the position of the author of the source text. |
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Argumentation by the examinee of his own opinion on the problem |
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The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave at least 2 arguments, one of which was taken from fiction, journalistic or scientific literature). |
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The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave at least 2 arguments, based on knowledge or life experience), conducted only 1 argument from fiction, journalistic or scientific literature. |
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The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave 1 argument), relying on knowledge, life or reading experience. |
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The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the author’s position), but did not provide arguments, the examinee’s opinion is only formally stated (for example: “I agree / disagree with the author”), not reflected in the work at all. |
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SPEECH DESIGN OF AN ESSAY |
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Semantic integrity, speech coherence and consistency of presentation |
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The work of the examinee is characterized by semantic integrity, verbal coherence and consistency of presentation: There are no logical errors, the sequence of presentation is not broken; There are no violations of paragraph division of the text in the work. |
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The work of the examinee is characterized by semantic integrity, coherence and consistency of presentation, 1 logical error was made, There is 1 violation of paragraph division of the text in the work. |
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The examinee’s work reveals a communicative intent, more than 1 logical error was made, There are 2 cases of violation of paragraph division of the text. |
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Accuracy and expressiveness of speech |
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The work of the examinee is characterized by the accuracy of expression of thoughts and the variety of grammatical structure of speech. |
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The work of the examinee is characterized by the accuracy of expression of thoughts, the monotony of the grammatical structure of speech can be traced, the work of the examinee is characterized by a variety of grammatical structure of speech, there are violations of the accuracy of expression of thoughts. |
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The work of the examinee is characterized by a poor vocabulary and monotony of the grammatical structure of speech. |
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LITERACY |
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Compliance spelling standards |
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no spelling errors (or 1 minor error) |
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1-2 mistakes were made |
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more than 2-3 mistakes were made |
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more than 3 mistakes were made | 0 | |
Compliance with punctuation standards |
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no punctuation errors (or 1 minor error) |
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1-2 mistakes were made |
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2-3 mistakes were made |
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more than 3 errors | 0 | |
Compliance with language norms |
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no grammatical errors |
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1-2 mistakes were made |
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more than 2 mistakes were made |
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Compliance speech norms |
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no more than 1 speech error was made |
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2-3 mistakes were made |
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more than 3 mistakes were made |
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Compliance with ethical standards |
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there are no ethical errors in the work |
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ethical mistakes were made (1 or more) |
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Maintain factual accuracy in background material |
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there are no factual errors in the background material |
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there were factual errors (1 or more) in the background material |
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Maximum points for an essay |
When assessing literacy (K7–K10), the length of the essay should be taken into account. The assessment standards indicated in the table are developed for essays of 150–300 words. If the essay contains less than 70 words, then such work is not counted and is scored 0 points, the task is considered uncompleted.
When counting words, both independent and functional parts of speech are taken into account. Any sequence of words written without a space is counted (for example, “still” is one word, “still” is two words). Initials with a surname are considered one word (for example, “M.Yu. Lermontov” is one word). Any other symbols, in particular numbers, are not taken into account when calculating (for example, “5 years” is one word, “five years” is two words).
If the essay contains partially or completely rewritten by the examinee the text of the review of task 24 and/or information about the author of the text, then the volume of such work is determined without taking into account the text of the review and/or information about the author of the text.
When assessing an essay ranging from 70 to 150 words, the number of permissible errors of four types (K7–K10) decreases.
2 points according to these criteria are given in the following cases:
K7 – there are no spelling errors (or one minor mistake was made);
K8 – there are no punctuation errors (or one minor error was made).
1 point according to these criteria is given in the following cases:
K7 – no more than two mistakes were made;
K8 – one to three mistakes were made;
K9 – no grammatical errors;
K10 – no more than one speech error was made.
The highest score according to criteria K7–K12 is not given for work ranging from 70 to 150 words.
If the essay is a retelling or completely rewritten of the original text without any comments, then such work in all aspects of the test (K1-K12) is graded 0 points. If the work, which is a rewritten or retold source text, contains fragments of the examinee’s text, then only the number of words that belong to the examinee is taken into account when checking. Work written without reference to the text read (not based on this text) is not graded.
In accordance with the Procedure for conducting state final certification for educational programs of secondary general education (order of the Ministry of Education and Science of Russia dated December 26, 2013 No. 1400, registered by the Ministry of Justice of Russia on February 3, 2014 No. 31205) “61. Based on the results of the first and second checks, the experts independently assign points for each answer to the tasks of the Unified State Examination paper with a detailed answer... 62. In the event of a significant discrepancy in the points given by two experts, a third check is assigned. A significant discrepancy in scores is defined in the assessment criteria for the relevant academic subject. The expert carrying out the third check is provided with information about the scores assigned by the experts who previously checked the examination work.”
A significant discrepancy is considered to be a discrepancy of 8 or more. primary points between the sums of points awarded by the first and second experts for completing task 25 (for all 12 assessment positions). In this case, the third expert must give points only for those assessment positions for which the points given by the first and second experts differ.
An essay based on the text read is task 25 in the Unified State Exam in the Russian language. To prepare for this task you need to pay attention Special attention, since at best it can bring 24 points, which is more than 40% of the total number of points that can be scored in the exam.
Essay on the Unified State Examination in the Russian language- this is the final work that tests all the student’s knowledge and skills in the subject: the ability to identify a problem in a text and argue one’s opinion, the ability to coherently express one’s thoughts and, of course, knowledge of the rules of the Russian language.
Let us immediately note that the final essay should consist of 150-300 words - this is the optimal length. Shorter essays may be scored lower on some criteria, and if the essay is less than 70 words, it will be scored 0 points on each criterion. At the same time, you need to remember: the longer the essay, the greater the likelihood of making mistakes in it, so there is no point in writing too much large text, exceeding 300 words.
Let's consider the basic rules and evaluation criteria that need to be taken into account when writing an essay, and also draw up rough plan on which you need to write an essay.
How to write an Unified State Exam essay in Russian? The essay must comply with a certain plan, for this you can earn from 0 to 8 points. We list the main criteria that relate to the content of the essay:
To write an Unified State Exam essay in the Russian language, you need to be able to coherently and accurately express your thoughts. For this you can get from 0 to 4 points. There are 2 criteria here:
When writing an essay, you need to know and follow all the norms of the Russian language. For these criteria in total you can get from 0 to 12 points (half of all points for the essay). There are 6 main criteria here:
We have listed all the main criteria that need to be taken into account in order to write an Unified State Exam essay in the Russian language for maximum score.
EVALUATION CRITERIA
EXAMINATION IN RUSSIAN LANGUAGE IN 11TH GRADE (USE)
For correct execution everyone tasks exam paper can be obtained as much as possible 55 primary points.
For correct execution everyone tasks parts 1 (except for tasks 7, 15 and 24) the graduate receives 1 point each. For an incorrect answer or lack thereof, 0 points are given.
For completion tasks 7 may be exhibited from 0 to 5 points. For each correctly indicated digit corresponding to a number from the list, the examinee receives 1 point (5 points: no errors; 4 points: 1 error made; 3 points: 2 errors made; 2 points: 2 digits indicated correctly; 1 point: correctly indicated only one digit; 0 points: completely incorrect answer, i.e. incorrect sequence of numbers or lack thereof). The order in which the numbers are written in the answer matters.
For completion tasks 15 may be exhibited from 0 to 2 points. For each correctly indicated number corresponding to the answer number, the examinee receives 1 point. If 2 numbers are given correctly, the examinee receives 2 points.
For completion tasks 24 may be exhibited from 0 to 4 points. For each correctly indicated number corresponding to the number of a term from the list, the examinee receives 1 point (4 points: no errors; 3 points: 1 error made; 2 points: 2 errors made; 1 point: only one number is indicated correctly; 0 points: a completely incorrect answer, i.e. an incorrect sequence of numbers or its absence.The order in which the numbers are written in the answer matters.
Maximum points, which can be received by a student who correctly completes the task parts 2, is 23 points.
Criteria for assessing an assignment with a detailed answer (essay)
Criteria for assessing the answer to task C1
Points
I
Contents of the essay
K1
Formulation of source text problems
The examinee (in one form or another in any part of the essay) correctly formulated one of the problems of the source text.
There are no factual errors related to the understanding and formulation of the problem
1
The examinee was unable to correctly formulate any of the problems in the source text.
0
K2
Commentary on the formulated problem of the source text
The problem formulated by the examinee is commented on based on the source text. Factual errors associated with understanding the problem of the source text, no in comments
2
The problem formulated by the examinee was not commented on,or
there were more than 1 factual errors in the comments related to understanding the source text, or another problem not formulated by the examinee was commented on,or
a simple retelling of the text or its fragment is given as comments,
or
a large fragment of the source text is quoted as comments
0
K3
The examinee correctly formulated the position of the author (narrator) of the source text on the commented problem.
There are no factual errors related to understanding the position of the author of the source text
1
0
K4
Argumentation by the examinee of his own opinion on the problem
The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave at least 2 arguments, one of which was taken from fiction, journalistic or scientific literature)
3
The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave at least 2 arguments, based on knowledge, life experience), or provided only 1 argument from fiction, journalistic or scientific literature
2
The examinee expressed his opinion on the problem formulated by him, posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the position of the author), argued it (gave 1 argument), relying on knowledge and life experience
1
The examinee formulated his opinion on the problem posed by the author of the text (agreeing or disagreeing with the author’s position), but did not provide arguments, or the examinee’s opinion is stated only formally (for example: “I agree / disagree with the author”), or the examinee's opinion is not reflected in the work at all
0
II
Speech design of the essay
K5
Semantic integrity, speech coherence and consistency of presentation
The work of the examinee is characterized by semantic integrity, verbal coherence and consistency of presentation:
– there are no logical errors, the sequence of presentation is not broken;
– there are no violations of paragraph division of the text in the work
2
The work of the examinee is characterized by semantic integrity, coherence and consistency of presentation, But 1 logical error was made, and/or there is 1 violation of paragraph division of the text in the work
1
The examinee’s work reveals a communicative intent,
but more than 1 logical error was made,
and/or
there are 2 cases of violation of paragraph division of the text
0
K6
Accuracy and expressiveness of speech
The work of the examinee is characterized by the accuracy of expression of thoughts and the variety of grammatical structure of speech.
*The examinee receives the highest score for this criterion only if the highest score is obtained for the K10 criterion
2
The work of the examinee is characterized by the accuracy of expression of thoughts, But the monotony of the grammatical structure of speech can be traced, or the work of the examinee is characterized by a variety of grammatical structure of speech, But there are violations of the accuracy of expression of thoughts
1
The work of the examinee is characterized by a poor vocabulary and monotony of grammatical structure of speech
0
III
Literacy
K7
Compliance with spelling standards
no spelling errors (or 1 minor error)
3
no more than 2 mistakes were made
2
3–4 mistakes were made
1
more than 4 mistakes were made
0
K8
Compliance with punctuation standards
no punctuation errors (or 1 minor error)
3
1–3 mistakes were made
2
4–5 mistakes were made
1
more than 5 mistakes were made
0
K9
Compliance with language norms
no grammatical errors
2
1–2 mistakes were made
1
more than 2 mistakes were made
0
K10
Compliance with speech norms
no more than 1 speech error was made
2
2–3 mistakes were made
1
more than 3 mistakes were made
0
K11
Compliance with ethical standards
there are no ethical errors in the work
1
ethical mistakes were made (1 or more)
0
K12.
Maintain factual accuracy in background material
there are no factual errors in the background material
1
there were factual errors (1 or more) in the background material
0
Maximum points for all written work (K1–K12)
When assessing literacy (K7–K10), the length of the essay should be taken into account. The assessment standards indicated in the table are developed for essays of 150–300 words.
If the essay contains less than 70 words, then such work is not counted and is scored zero points, the task is considered uncompleted.
When assessing an essay of from 70 to 150 words number of allowed errors four types (K7–K10) decreases.
2 points according to these criteria are given in the following cases:
K7 – no spelling errors (or 1 minor error was made);
K8 – no punctuation errors (or 1 minor error).
1 point according to these criteria is given in the following cases:
K7 – no more than 2 mistakes were made;
K8 – 1–3 mistakes were made;
K9 – no grammatical errors;
K10 – no more than 1 speech error was made.
Highest mark according to criteria K7–K12 for work of volume from 70 to 150 words Not is put.
If the essay is a retelling or completely rewritten of the original text without any comments, then such work on all aspects of the test (K1-K12) is scored zero points.
If the work, which is a rewritten or retold source text, contains fragments of the examinee’s text, then only the number of words that belong to the examinee is taken into account when checking. Work written without reference to the text read (not based on this text) is not graded.
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