Nikolaev A.I. Fundamentals of literary criticism. Syntactic means of artistic expressiveness of speech

The expressiveness of Russian speech. means of expression.

Fine- means of expression language

TRAILS -use of the word in figurative meaning. Lexical argument

List of trails

Term meaning

Example

Allegory

Allegory. Trope, which consists in the allegorical depiction of an abstract concept with the help of a concrete, life image.

In fables and fairy tales, cunning is shown in the form of a fox, greed - a wolf.

Hyperbola

Artistic medium based on exaggeration

The eyes are huge, like searchlights (V. Mayakovsky)

Grotesque

Extreme exaggeration, giving the image a fantastic character

Mayor with a stuffed head at Saltykov-Shchedrin.

Irony

Ridicule, which contains an assessment of what is ridiculed. The sign of irony is double meaning, where the true will not be directly stated, but the opposite, implied.

Where, smart, are you delirious head? (I. Krylov).

Litotes

Artistic medium based on understatement (as opposed to hyperbole)

The waist is no thicker than the neck of a bottle (N. Gogol).

Metaphor, extended metaphor

Hidden comparison. A type of trope in which individual words or expressions come together in terms of the similarity of their meanings or in contrast. Sometimes the whole poem is an extended poetic image.

With a sheaf of your oatmeal hair

You touched me forever. (S. Yesenin.)

Metonymy

A type of path in which words come together according to the contiguity of the concepts they denote. A phenomenon or object is depicted using other words or concepts. For example, the name of the profession is replaced by the name of the instrument of activity. There are many examples: the transfer from a vessel to the contents, from a person to his clothes, from locality to residents, from organization to participants, from author to works

When the shore of hell Will take me forever, When the Feather will fall asleep forever, my joy ... (A. Pushkin.)

On silver, on gold ate.

Well, eat another plate, son.

personification

Such an image inanimate objects in which they are endowed with the properties of living beings with the gift of speech, the ability to think and feel

What are you howling about, wind

night,

What are you complaining about so much?

(F. Tyutchev.)

Paraphrase (or paraphrase)

One of the tropes in which the name of an object, person, phenomenon is replaced by an indication of its features, the most characteristic, enhancing the figurativeness of speech

King of beasts (instead of lion)

Synecdoche

A type of metonymy, which consists in transferring the meaning of one object to another on the basis of a quantitative relationship between them: a part instead of a whole; the whole in the meaning of the part; singular in the meaning of general; replacing a number with a set; replacement of a specific concept by a generic one

All flags will visit us. (A. Pushkin.); Swede, Russian stabs, cuts, cuts. We all look to Nap oleones.

Epithet

figurative definition; a word that defines an object and emphasizes its properties

dissuaded by the grove

golden birch cheerful language.

Comparison

A technique based on comparing a phenomenon or concept with another phenomenon

The ice is not strong on the icy river, as if it lies like melting sugar. (N. Nekrasov.)

FIGURES OF SPEECH

A generalized name for stylistic devices in which the word, unlike tropes, does not necessarily appear in a figurative sense. grammatical argument.

Figure

Term meaning

Example

Anaphora (or monogamy)

The repetition of words or phrases at the beginning of sentences, poetic lines, stanzas.

I love you, Peter's creation, I love your strict, slender appearance ...

Antithesis

Stylistic device of contrast, opposition of phenomena and concepts. Often based on the use of antonyms

And the new denies the old so much!.. It grows old before our eyes! Already shorter skirts. It's already longer! Leaders are younger. It's already older! Better manners.

gradation

(graduality) - a stylistic means that allows you to recreate events and actions, thoughts and feelings in the process, in development, in increasing or decreasing significance

I do not regret, do not call, do not cry, Everything will pass like smoke from white apple trees.

Inversion

permutation; stylistic figure, consisting in violation of the general grammatical sequence of speech

He shot past the doorman like an arrow up the marble steps.

Lexical repetition

Intentional repetition of the same word in the text

I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry! And I forgive you, and I forgive you. I do not hold evil, I promise you, But only you, too, forgive me!

Pleonasm

The repetition of similar words and turns, the injection of which creates one or another stylistic effect.

My friend, my friend, I am very, very sick.

Oxymoron

A combination of opposite words that don't go together.

Dead souls, bitter joy, sweet sorrow, ringing silence.

Rhetorical question, exclamation, appeal

Techniques used to enhance the expressiveness of speech. A rhetorical question is asked not with the aim of getting an answer to it, but for an emotional impact on the reader. Exclamations and appeals enhance emotional perception

Where are you galloping, proud horse, And where will you lower your hooves? (A. Pushkin.) What a summer! What a summer! Yes, it's just witchcraft. (F. Tyutchev.)

Syntax parallelism

Reception, which consists in a similar construction of sentences, lines or stanzas.

I lookI look at the future with fear, I look at the past with longing...

Default

A figure that allows the listener to guess and think for himself what will be discussed in a suddenly interrupted statement.

You'll go home soon: Look... Well, what? my

fate, To tell the truth, very Nobody is concerned.

Ellipsis

Figure poetic syntax, based on the omission of one of the members of the sentence, easily restored in meaning

We villages - in ashes, hailstones - in dust, In swords - sickles and plows. (V. Zhukovsky.)

Epiphora

A stylistic figure opposite to anaphora; repetition at the end of lines of poetry of a word or phrase

Dear friend, and in this quiet

Home. The fever hits me. Can't find me a quiet place

HouseNear a peaceful fire. (A. Blok.)

DESIGN POSSIBILITIES OF VOCABULARY

Lexical argument

Terms

Meaning

Examples

Antonyms,

contextual

antonyms

Words that are opposite in meaning.

Contextual antonyms - it is in the context that they are opposites. Outside the context, this opposition is lost.

Wave and stone, poetry and prose, ice and fire... (A. Pushkin.)

Synonyms

contextual

synonyms

Words that are close in meaning. Contextual synonyms - it is in the context that they are close. Out of context, intimacy is lost.

To desire - to want, to have a hunt, to strive, to dream, to crave, to hunger

Homonyms

Words that sound the same but have different meanings.

Knee - a joint connecting the thigh and lower leg; passage in birdsong

homographs

Different words that match in spelling but not in pronunciation.

Castle (palace) - lock (on the door), Flour (torment) - flour (product)

Paronyms

Words that are similar in sound but different in meaning

Heroic - heroic, double - dual, effective - real

Words in a figurative sense

Unlike direct meaning words, stylistically neutral, devoid of imagery, figurative - figurative, stylistically colored.

Sword of justice, sea of ​​light

Dialectisms

A word or phrase that exists in a certain area and is used in speech by the inhabitants of this area

Draniki, shanezhki, beetroots

jargon

Words and expressions that are outside the literary norm, belonging to some kind of jargon - a type of speech used by people united by a common interest, habits, occupations.

Head - watermelon, globe, saucepan, basket, pumpkin...

Profession-isms

Words used by people of the same profession

Caboose, boatswain, watercolor, easel

Terms

Words meant to mean special concepts science, technology and others.

Grammar, surgical, optics

Book vocabulary

Words specific to writing and having special stylistic coloring.

Immortality, incentive, prevail...

colloquial

vocabulary

Words, colloquial use,

characterized by some roughness, reduced character.

Doodle, flirtatious, wobble

Neologisms (new words)

New words emerging to denote new concepts that have just emerged. There are also individual author's neologisms.

There will be a storm - we'll bet

And let's have fun with her.

Obsolete words (archaisms)

Words ousted from the modern language

others denoting the same concepts.

Fair - excellent, diligent - caring,

foreigner - foreigner

Borrowed

Words transferred from words in other languages.

Parliament, Senate, MP, consensus

Phraseologisms

Stable combinations of words, constant in their meaning, composition and structure, reproduced in speech as whole lexical units.

To prevaricate - to be hypocritical, to beat baklu-shi - to mess around, on hastily- fast

EXPRESSIVE-EMOTIONAL VOCABULARY

Conversational.

Words that have a slightly reduced stylistic coloring compared to neutral vocabulary, characteristic of spoken language emotionally charged.

Dirty, screamer, bearded man

Emotionally colored words

Estimatedcharacter, both positive and negative.

Adorable, wonderful, disgusting, villain

Words with suffixes of emotional evaluation.

Cute little hare, little mind, brainchild

ARTISTIC POSSIBILITIES OF MORPHOLOGY

grammatical argument

1. Expressive usage case, gender, animation, etc.

Something air it is not enough for me,

I drink the wind, I swallow the fog... (V. Vysotsky.)

We rest in Sochah.

How Plushkins divorced!

2. Direct and figurative use of tense forms of the verb

I'm comingi went to school yesterday see announcement: "Quarantine". Oh and rejoiced I!

3. Expressive use of words different parts speech.

happened to me most amazing history!

I got unpleasant message.

I was visiting at her. The cup will not pass you by this.

4. Use of interjections, onomatopoeic words.

Here is closer! They jump ... and into the yard Yevgeny! "Oh!"- and lighter shade Tatiana jump into other canopies. (A. Pushkin.)

AUDIO EXPRESSION

Means

Term meaning

Example

Alliteration

Reception of figurative amplification by repetition of consonant sounds

hissfoamy glasses And punch flame blue ..

Alternation

Sound alternation. The change of sounds occupying the same place in a morpheme in different occasions its use.

Tangent - touch, shine - flash.

Assonance

Reception of figurative amplification by repetition of vowel sounds

The thaw is boring to me: the stench, the dirt, in the spring I am sick. (A. Pushkin.)

sound recording

The technique of enhancing the figurativeness of the text by constructing phrases, lines in such a way that would correspond to the reproduced picture

For three days it was heard how on the road a boring, long

The joints were tapping: to the east, east, east ...

(P. Antokolsky reproduces the sound of carriage wheels.)

Onomatopoeia

Imitation with the help of the sounds of the language of the sounds of living and inanimate nature

When the mazurka thundered... (A. Pushkin.)

ARTISTIC SYNTAX CAPABILITIES

grammatical argument

1. Rows homogeneous members suggestions.

When empty And weak a person hears a flattering review about his dubious merits, he revels with your vanity, arrogant and quite loses his tiny ability to be critical of his deeds and to your person.(D. Pisarev.)

2. Offers with introductory words, appeals, separate members.

Probably,there, in native places just like in my childhood and youth, kupava blooms in the marsh backwaters and the reeds rustle, who made me with their rustle, with their prophetic whispers, that poet, who I have become, who I was, who I will be when I die. (K. Balmont.)

3. Expressive use of sentences different type(complex, compound, unionless, one-part, incomplete, etc.).

They speak Russian everywhere; it is the language of my father and my mother, it is the language of my babysitter, my childhood, my first love, almost every moment of my life, which entered my past as an integral property, as the basis of my personality. (K. Balmont.)

4. Dialogical presentation.

- Well? Is it true that he is so handsome?

- Surprisingly good, handsome, one might say. Slender, tall, blush all over the cheek ...

- Right? And I thought he had a pale face. What? What did he look like to you? Sad, thoughtful?

- What do you? Yes, I have never seen such a mad one. He took it into his head to run into the burners with us.

- Run into the burners with you! Impossible!(A. Pushkin.)

5. Parceling - a stylistic device for dividing a phrase into parts or even separate words in order to give speech an intonational expression by means of its jerky pronunciation. Parceled words are separated from each other by dots or exclamation marks, while observing the remaining syntactic and grammatical rules.

Freedom and brotherhood. There will be no equality. None. Nobody. Not equal. Never.(A. Volodin.) He saw me and frozen. Numb. Stopped talking.

6. Non-union or asyndeton - the intentional omission of unions, which gives the text dynamism, swiftness.

Swede, Russian stabs, cuts, cuts. People knew that somewhere, very far from them, there was a war going on. To be afraid of wolves - do not go into the forest.

7. Polyunion or polysyndeton - repeating unions serve to logically and intonationally emphasize the members of the sentence connected by the unions.

The ocean was moving before my eyes, and it swayed, and thundered, and sparkled, and faded, and shone, and went somewhere to infinity.

I will either sob, or scream, or faint.

Tests.

1. Choose the correct answer:

1) On that white April night Petersburg I saw Blok for the last time... (E. Zamyatin).

a) metaphorab) hyperbolav) metonymy

2.Then you get cold in the shine of moonlight,

You moan, doused with foam wounds.

(V. Mayakovsky)

a) alliteration b) assonance c) anaphora

3. I drag myself in the dust - and I soar in the sky;

Alien to everyone in the world - and the world is ready to embrace. (F. Petrarch).

a) oxymoron b) antonym c) antithesis

4. Let it fill with years

life quota,

costs

only

remember this wonder

tears apart

mouth

yawn

wider than the Gulf of Mexico.

(V. Mayakovsky)

a) hyperbolab) litotave) personification

5. Choose the correct answer:

1) It was drizzling with beady rain, so airy that it seemed that it did not reach the ground and haze of water dust floated in the air. (V. Pasternak).

a) epithet b) comparison c) metaphor

6.And in autumn days the flame flowing with life in the blood is not extinguished. (K. Batyushkov)

a) metaphorab) personification) hyperbole

7. Sometimes he falls passionately in love

In my elegant sadness.

(M. Yu. Lermontov)

a) antithesab) oxymoron c) epithet

8. Diamond is polished with a diamond,

The string is dictated by the string.

a) anaphora b) comparison c) parallelism

9. On one assumption of such a case, you would have to pull out the hair from your head and emit streams... what am I saying! rivers, lakes, seas, oceans tears!

(F.M. Dostoevsky)

a) metonymy b) gradation c) allegory

10. Choose the correct answer:

1) Black tailcoats rushed apart and in heaps here and there. (N. Gogol)

a) metaphorab) metonymy c) personification

11. The idler sits at the gate,

mouth wide open,

And no one will understand

Where is the gate, and where is the mouth.

a) hyperbolab) litotave) comparison

12. C impudent modesty looks into the eyes. (A. Blok).

a) epithetb) metaphorav) oxymoron

Option

Answer

Most supreme manifestation the skill of public speaking is contact with the audience, that is, a common mental state speaker and audience. This community arises on the basis of joint mental activity, similar emotional experiences. The attitude of the speaker to the subject of speech, his interest, conviction evoke a response from the listeners. As the saying goes, the word belongs half to the one who speaks and half to the one who listens. You need to feel the audience and be able to adjust your speech depending on its reaction. The speaker must have a wide range of knowledge on many issues, and be able to lead a discussion on any topic.

The main indicators of mutual understanding between the communicants are a positive reaction to the words of the speaker, the external expression of attention from the listeners (their posture, focused gaze, exclamations of approval, head nods, smiles, laughter, applause), "working" silence in the hall. Contact is a variable value. It can be complete (with the whole audience) and incomplete, stable and unstable in different fragments speech utterance.

To win an audience, you need to establish and constantly maintain eye contact with it. The speaker usually looks around the audience slowly.

Before the start of speech, a short psychological pause is maintained - 5 - 7 seconds. The speech of the speaker should not be monotonous. Phrases should be pronounced with different intonation. They are separated by pauses.

For modern public speaking is a characteristic combination of logical-analytical and emotional-figurative linguistic means.

No matter how interesting the topic is, the attention of the audience dulls over time. It must be supported by the following oratory techniques:

· Question and answer reception. The speaker raises questions and answers them himself, raises possible doubts and objections, clarifies them and comes to certain conclusions.

· The transition from a monologue to a dialogue (controversy) allows you to involve individual participants in the discussion process, thereby activating their interest.

· Reception of creation of a problem situation. Listeners are invited

a situation that raises the question: "Why?", which stimulates their cognitive activity.

Reception of novelty of information, hypotheses makes the audience assume, reflect.

・Reliance on personal experience, opinions that are always interesting to listeners.

· Showing the practical significance of information.

The use of humor allows you to quickly win over an audience.

· A short digression from the topic gives the listeners the opportunity to "rest".

· Slowing down with a simultaneous decrease in the strength of the voice can draw attention to the responsible places of the speech (reception "quiet voice").

Reception of gradation - an increase in the semantic and emotional significance of the word. Gradation allows you to strengthen, give them emotional expressiveness to a phrase, a formulated thought.

· Reception of inversion - a speech turnover, which, as it were, deploys the usual, generally accepted train of thought and expressions to the diametrically opposite one.

Receiving an appeal to one's own thoughts.

Among the techniques of oratory, which significantly increase its effectiveness and persuasiveness, lexical techniques should be highlighted. In almost all guides to oratory, among lexical devices, it is recommended to use the so-called paths.

Trope- (from the Greek tropos - turn, turn of speech), the use of a word or expression in a figurative, figurative sense; in a narrower sense - word transformation, through which the aesthetic effect of expressiveness in speech is achieved (artistic, journalistic, everyday, etc.). Tropes include comparisons, metaphors, epithets, hyperbole, and others.

Comparison- one of the most frequently used techniques, which has a great persuasive power, stimulates associative and figurative thinking among listeners and thus allows the speaker to achieve the desired effect.

Metaphor- this is the transfer of the name of one object to another, this is the verbal convergence of 2 phenomena by similarity or contrast. For example: "The locomotive of history cannot be stopped..."

Epithet- figurative definition of an object, phenomenon, revealing its essence. For example: "A student is not a vessel to be filled with knowledge, but a torch to be lit!.."

Allegory- allegorically depicts something. For example: "Once a passer-by asked the builder:" What are you doing? He thought and replied: "Don't you see? I'm driving stones." The second builder answered the same question: “I make money!”

Hyperbola is a kind of trail, consisting in a deliberate exaggeration of the properties, qualities of objects and phenomena. For example: " rare bird will fly to the middle of the Dnieper.

The specificity of oral speech is manifested in the construction of phrases and whole sentences. It is believed that in public speaking, preference should be given to shorter sentences, they are better perceived by ear and remembered. In addition, a short sentence allows for a more variant approach to changing intonation.

The listed linguistic means of contact help to overcome the "barrier", serve to unite the speaker with the listeners.

Author's punctuation - this is punctuation, not provided for by punctuation rules. Author's signs convey the additional meaning invested in them by the author. Most often, a dash is used as copyright marks, which emphasizes or contrasts: Born to crawl - can't fly or emphasizes the second part after the sign: Love is the most important thing. Author's exclamation marks serve as a means of expressing a joyful or sad feeling, mood.

Anaphora, or unanimity -(gr. anaphora - bringing up). A stylistic figure consisting in the repetition of the same elements at the beginning of each parallel row (verse, stanza, prose passage).

    Anaphora sound. The repetition of the same combinations of sounds.

Thunderstorm demolished bridges, Coffins from a blurry cemetery.(Pushkin)

    Anaphora morpheme. Repetition of the same morphemes or parts of compound words. ...Black-eyed girl, Black-maned horse!(Lermontov)

    Anaphora lexical. Repetition of the same words Not in vain did the winds blow, Not in vain did the storm go.(Yesenin)

    Syntactic anaphora. Repetition of the same syntactic constructions. Do I wander along the noisy streets, Do I enter a crowded temple, Do I sit among the foolish youths, I indulge in my dreams.(Pushkin)

    Anaphora strophic(repetition of the same elements at the beginning of stanzas). See the poem by M. Yu. Lermontov "When the yellowing field is agitated ...".

Antithesis - a stylistic device that consists in a sharp opposition of concepts, characters, images, creating the effect of a sharp contrast. It helps to better convey, depict contradictions, contrast phenomena. It serves as a way of expressing the author's view of the described phenomena, images, etc.

exclamation particles - a way of expressing the emotional mood of the author, a method of creating an emotional pathos of the text: ABOUT, how beautiful you are, my land! And how good are your fields!

exclamatory sentences express the emotional attitude of the author to the described (anger, irony, regret, joy, admiration): Disgraceful attitude! How can you save happiness! Exclamatory sentences also express a call to action: Let's save our soul as a shrine!

Gradation - a stylistic figure that consists in the consequent intensification or, conversely, the weakening of comparisons, images, epithets, metaphors and other expressive means of artistic speech: For the sake of your child, for the sake of the family, for the sake of the people, for the sake of humanity - take care of the world! Gradation is ascending (strengthening of the feature) and descending (weakening of the feature).

Inversion -(from lat. inversio - permutation) - changing the order of words in a sentence to achieve a certain artistic goal, for example, to enhance emotional perception. An agile stream runs from the mountain (Tyutchev). This reverse word order in a sentence. In direct order, the subject precedes the predicate, the agreed definition is before the word being defined, the inconsistent definition is after it, the addition is after the control word, the adverb of the mode of action is before the verb: The youth of today quickly realized the falsity of this truth. And with inversion, the words are arranged in a different order than is established by grammatical rules. This is a strong expressive means used in emotional, excited speech: Beloved homeland, my native land, should we take care of you!

Composite joint - is the repetition at the beginning of a new sentence of a word or words from the previous sentence, usually ending it: She did everything for meMotherland. motherland taught me, raised me, gave me a ticket toa life. A life, which I am proud of.

Polyunion - a rhetorical figure, consisting in the deliberate repetition of coordinating conjunctions for the logical and emotional highlighting of the enumerated concepts: AND thunder did not strikeAnd the sky did not fall to the ground,And the rivers did not overflow from such grief!

Parceling - the technique of dividing a phrase into parts or even into separate words. Its purpose is to give speech intonational expression by its abrupt pronunciation: The poet suddenly stood up. Turned pale.

Repeat - conscious use of the same word or combination of words in order to enhance the meaning of this image, concept, etc.: Pushkin wassufferer, sufferer in the full sense of the word.

Connecting structures - construction of the text, in which each subsequent part, continuing the first, main one, is separated from it by a long pause, which is indicated by a dot, sometimes an ellipsis or a dash. This is a means of creating emotional pathos of the text: Belorussky railway station on Victory Day. And a crowd of greeters. And tears. And the bitterness of loss.

Rhetorical questions and rhetorical exclamations - a special means of creating the emotionality of speech, expressing the author's position.

Who hasn't cursed the stationmasters, who hasn't scolded them? Who, in a moment of anger, did not demand from them a fatal book in order to write in it their useless complaint of oppression, rudeness and malfunction? Who does not revere them as monsters human race, equal to the late clerk, or at least the Murom robbers?

What summer, what summer? Yes, it's just magic!

Syntactic parallelism - the same construction of several adjacent sentences. With its help, the author seeks to highlight, emphasize the expressed idea: Mother is an earthly miracle. Mother is a sacred word.

A combination of short simple and long complex or complicated sentences with a variety of turnovers helps to convey the pathos of the article, the emotional mood of the author.

“Binoculars. Binoculars. people want to be closer to the Mona Lisa. Consider the pores of her skin, eyelashes. Glare pupils. They seem to feel the breath of Mona Lisa. They, like Vasari, feel that “the eyes of the Gioconda have that brilliance and that moisture that are usually seen in a living person ... and in the deepening of the neck, with a careful look, you can see the beating of the pulse ... And they see and hear it. And it's not a miracle. Such is the skill of Leonardo."

“1855. The zenith of Delacroix's glory. Paris. Palace of Fine Arts ... in the central hall of the exposition - thirty-five paintings of the great romantic.

One-part, incomplete sentences make the author's speech more expressive, emotional, enhance the emotional pathos of the text: Gioconda. A human babble. Whisper. The rustle of dresses. Quiet steps ... Not a single stroke, - I hear the words. - No smears. How alive.

Epiphora - the same ending of several sentences, reinforcing the meaning of this image, concept, etc.: I've been walking all my lifeto you. I have believed all my lifeinto you. I have loved all my lifeyou.

Table 3. Identification of figurative and expressive means (example)

"All mine," said the gold; “All mine,” said damask steel; “I will buy everything,” said the gold; "I'll take everything," said the bulat.

but naphora, epiphora

To reinforce the previous word

You are poor, you are abundant, You are powerful, you are powerless, Mother Russia

antithesis, rhetorical exclamation, rhetorical appeal

to create contrast

Yes, it was bad weather! What a storm! Whirlwind, hurricane, cyclone, tornado, typhoon hit us

gradation

gives rise or fall impressions

The forest drops its crimson dress, The withered field is silvered by frost.

inversion

arrangement of words in a special order to enhance expressiveness

Young old age. Not everyone is blessed with such happiness!

oxymoron

gives originality

To sing about Russia - what to strive for in the temple. About Russia to sing - what to meet spring

syntactic parallelism

the same construction of sentences

Beast - lair, Wanderer - road

ellipsis

gives life to speech

No, I wanted: maybe you ...

default

deliberate understatement so that the reader completes the picture

This summer I saw the sea. First time.

parceling

part of the sentence is separated from the main one to focus attention

Swede, Russian stabs, cuts, cuts

asyndeton

shows dynamics

And the sling, and the arrow, and the crafty dagger spare the winner years

polyunion

emphasizes uniformity, gives expressiveness

Literary analysis of the lyricalworks

As an example of literary analysis, let us turn to the poem by M.Yu. Lermontov "Farewell, unwashed Russia...":

Farewell, unwashed Russia,

Country of slaves, country of masters.

And you, blue uniforms,

And you, their devoted people.

Perhaps behind the wall of the Caucasus

I will hide from your pashas,

From their all-seeing eye

From their all-hearing ears.

1. The poem "Farewell, unwashed Russia ..." was written in 1841 before the second exile of the poet to the Caucasus. Published only in 1887. 40s of the XIX century. are characterized as a time of social passivity of society, which replaced the national upsurge of the people in the Patriotic War of 1812 and the Decembrist uprising of 1825.

2. The work belongs to the mature stage in the work of M.Yu. Lermontov, the heyday of his poetic talent. In the 40s, such masterpieces of the poet's civil lyrics were written as “January 1st”, “And boring and sad ...”, “Motherland”, “Clouds”, etc. The poem “Farewell, unwashed Russia ... ”reflects the traditions of Decembrist poetry with its high civic pathos and call for social protest. For this stage in the work of M.Yu. Lermontov was characterized by a sharply critical perception of reality, bitterness and the motive of loneliness, a feeling of a deep discrepancy between dreams and real life. All these features are reflected in the poem under consideration.

3. The work belongs to lyrics and is characterized by a pronounced subjective attitude to the described reality. This is a lyrical monologue of the author, which contains a challenge to autocratic Russia. The work is distinguished by limited descriptiveness, rhetoric, conventionality (cf., for example, a hint of total surveillance, eavesdropping, suppression of freedom, dissent - due to hyperbolization and the ability to turn a detail into a symbol: from their all-seeing eye, from their all-hearing ears).

4. The work belongs to the genre lyric poem - this is an appeal to "the country of slaves, the country of masters." The accusatory pathos of the work, its angry intonation and clear rhythm are formed not only due to the special vocabulary and syntax, but also due to the poetic meter chosen by the author - iambic tetrameter. N.S. Gumilyov said about this size: “Each meter has its own soul, its own characteristics and tasks. Yamb, as if descending the stairs, ... is free, clear, firm and perfectly conveys human speech, the intensity of human will. The latter is especially noticeable in the analyzed poem.

The factors of “the unity of the verse series” and “the tightness of it”, noted by Yu.N. Tynyanov in poetry, are fully characteristic of the work under consideration, which is distinguished by the harmonious correspondence of form and content, the accuracy of poetic word usage and the aesthetic motivation of syntactic constructions. Semantic richness, laconism, lack of verbosity, rhetoric are important features of the poem.

The theme of the poem can be summarized as civil, antiserfdom. This is a work about the motherland, full of pain and bitterness for the people, who are passive and oppressed by the autocracy. The poem is characterized by monologism, a tendency towards expressiveness and open appraisal.

6. The main theme in the work is the theme of the motherland and the fate of the Russian people. This is a cross-cutting theme in Lermontov's poetry (cf. poems: "Russian Song", "Autumn", "Will", " Last son liberties”, “You are beautiful, the fields of the native land ...”, “I look at the future with fear”, “Motherland”, “Duma”). Unlike other works of Lermontov, where there is a contrast between the heroic past of Russia and gloomy reality, the poem in question presents the contemporary Russia of the poet with its despotic orders worthy of denunciation.

7. The composition of a small poem, consisting of two stanzas, is simple. The key statement - a maxim, reflecting the theme and idea of ​​the work, opens the work, built in the form of an excited monologue-reflection of the lyrical hero. The following presentation reveals and complements the meaning of the key statement. Thus, the general logical scheme of a poetic text includes a thesis and arguments (Scheme 6).

8. As for pathos analyzed poem, it can be defined as a combination of the tragic and satirical with elements of irony.

The pathos of the work is associated with the poet's characteristic state of "transition" from romanticism to realism, their peculiar combination. The text reveals the author's reflection, his self-absorption, tragic discord with the surrounding reality, longing for the lofty, perfect, characteristic for romance. At the same time, the poem embodies specific historical details of a certain stage in the development of society, expressed in artistic form, the author openly criticizes the existing order of things in the spirit of realism. In the poetic work under consideration, conditional forms characteristic of a satirical image are presented: paraphrase blue uniforms(about the royal gendarmes - the guardians of the autocratic order, who wore blue uniforms); Pasha(their ironic designation by the name of Turkish military dignitaries); all-seeing eye, all-hearing ears symbols that personify the brutal order in the country, based on denunciations and surveillance. rhetoric, which distinguishes the poem, is expressed by the excited appeal "Farewell, unwashed Russia ...", the use of vivid epithets, synecdoches and paraphrases (blue uniforms) metaphors (unwashed Russia, the wall of the Caucasus), hyperbole (From their all-seeing eye, / From their all-hearing ears).

9. General emotional tone works - angry, indignant, painted with pain and bitterness for the outraged people. The key in the work are the images of Russia, the people and the royal gendarmes. If in the poem "Motherland" the poet admitted: "I love the Fatherland, but with a strange love ...", then the analyzed text reveals this "strangeness" and a special attitude towards Russia, reflecting a complex range of feelings: hatred and love, pain and bitterness. Estimated epithet "unwashed", i.e. dirty,- in the context of the poem, it has the actual meaning of “trans. immoral, immoral." The following exposition reveals the essence of this through the device of contrast: land of slaves, land of masters. In shaping the image of a people silently enslaved, important role belongs to the epithet "devotee" (And you, a devoted people to them). Devotee - i.e. "full of love and fidelity", resigned. It is this circumstance that deeply revolts the lyrical hero, filling his heart with pain.

The images of the royal gendarmes are very expressive, formed on the basis of the associative-semantic connection of lexical means: blue uniforms, pashas, all-seeing eye, all-hearing ears. The image of the lyrical hero in this work is painted tragically. This is a brave, proud person, deeply suffering for his homeland, denying the obedience and humility of the people and the royal order. Regarding the chronotope, it is interesting to note that the poem presents images of the present tense ("here" and "now") - Farewell, unwashed Russia... and future: - Perhaps behind the wall of the Caucasus I will hide from your pashas ... The image of space as visible and imaginary, large-scale and remote (wall of the Caucasus) actualized in the reflections of the lyrical hero. In general, the figurative structure of the poem is aimed at expressing his ideas.

I. idea works can be defined as an active rejection and condemnation of the autocracy and the social passivity of the people. High civic pathos distinguishes this poem, which was perceived as a challenge to feudal Russia.

1. Artistic features poems are determined by its ideological and thematic originality and high civic pathos. Partially, they have already been discussed in connection with the characteristic rhetoric poetic text. All figurative and expressive means are aimed at creating a revealing tone, being focused on key images. Techniques of rhetorical appeal and contrast at the beginning of a poem (Farewell, unwashed Russia, Country of slaves, / country of masters) determine the subsequent artistic development of the text. The contrast is enhanced by contrasting images people and royal gendarmes due to synecdoche, periphrase and expressive epithet:

And you, blue uniforms, And you, the people devoted to them.

Use of metaphors (wall of the Caucasus, unwashed Russia), hyperbole in the formation of a generalizing image of autocratic despotism, total surveillance and eavesdropping (From their all-seeing eye / From their all-hearing ears) is very expressive and pragmatically effective.

Thus, the system of vivid artistic means and techniques forms the figurative structure of the work, expressing its ideological content.

The poem is typical for the late lyrics of M.Yu. Lermontov and reflects his individual author's stylistic features: romantic pathos combined with historically specific realistic authenticity in describing the social realities of the 40s of the 19th century, open social protest and rejection of the autocratic system; increased expression and a variety of visual and expressive means.

Let's summarize:

Literary analysis is the third stage of the philological analysis of a literary text.

The object of literary analysis is mainly content artwork,

Immanent analysis of a literary work must be supplemented projection, taking into account the cultural and historical context of the era. Literary analysis includes the study of the time and circumstances of writing a work; his place in the writer's work; definition of the literary type of the work and genre; the main issue; themes; compositions; pathos of the work and emotional tone; figurative system; ideas and artistic features.

Literary analysis complements and deepens the understanding of the content of a literary text and the creative personality of the author, obtained on the basis of linguistic and stylistic analysis of the text.

For modern oratorical speech, a combination of logical-analytical and emotional-figurative language means is characteristic. The practice of the best speakers shows that a dry business speech, reduced to the transfer of "bare" information in a modern, well-informed audience, as a rule, remains unattended, and often causes boredom and even irritation.

No matter how interesting the topic is, the attention of the audience dulls over time. It must be supported by the following oratory techniques:

Question-answer reception. The speaker raises questions and answers them himself, raises possible doubts and objections, clarifies them and comes to certain conclusions.

The transition from a monologue to a dialogue (controversy) allows you to involve individual participants in the discussion process, thereby activating their interest.

Reception of creation of a problem situation. Listeners are offered a situation that raises the question: "Why?", which stimulates their cognitive activity.

The reception of novelty of information, hypotheses makes the audience assume, reflect.

Reliance on personal experience, opinions that are always interesting to listeners.

Showing the practical significance of information.

Using humor allows you to quickly win over an audience.

A short digression from the topic gives the listeners the opportunity to "rest".

Slowing down with a simultaneous decrease in the strength of the voice can draw attention to the responsible places of the speech (the "quiet voice" technique).

Reception of gradation - an increase in the semantic and emotional significance of the word. Gradation allows you to strengthen, give them emotional expressiveness to a phrase, a formulated thought.

The technique of inversion is a speech turnover, which, as it were, deploys the usual, generally accepted train of thought and expressions to the diametrically opposite one.

Acceptance of an appeal to one's own thoughts.

Among the techniques of oratory, which significantly increase its effectiveness and persuasiveness, lexical techniques should be highlighted. In almost all guides to oratory, among lexical devices, it is recommended to use the so-called paths.

Tropes are speech turns and individual words used in a figurative sense, which allow you to achieve the necessary emotional expressiveness and imagery. Tropes include comparisons, metaphors, epithets, hyperbole, etc.

Comparison is one of the most frequently used techniques, which has great persuasive power, stimulates associative and figurative thinking in the audience, and thus allows the speaker to achieve the desired effect.

Metaphor is the transfer of the name of one object to another, it is the verbal convergence of 2 phenomena by similarity or contrast. For example: "The locomotive of history cannot be stopped..."

An epithet is a figurative definition of an object, a phenomenon that reveals its essence. For example: "A student is not a vessel to be filled with knowledge, but a torch to be lit!.."

Allegory - allegorically depicts something. For example: “Once a passer-by asked the builder: “What are you doing?” He thought and answered: “Don’t you see? I drive stones." The second builder answered the same question: "I earn money!"

Hyperbole is a kind of trope, consisting in a deliberate exaggeration of the properties, qualities of objects and phenomena. For example: "A rare bird will fly to the middle of the Dnieper."

An effective means of contact are special words and expressions that provide feedback. These are personal pronouns of the 1st and 2nd person (I, you, we, we are with you), verbs in the 1st and 2nd person (let's try to understand, make a reservation, note, please, mark for yourself, think, specify, etc.), appeals (dear colleagues, my dears), rhetorical questions (you want to hear my opinion, don't you?). The specificity of oral speech is manifested in the construction of phrases and whole sentences. It is believed that in public speaking, preference should be given to shorter sentences, they are better perceived by ear and remembered. In addition, a short sentence allows for a more variant approach to changing intonation.

You have probably heard more than once that Russian is one of the most difficult languages. Why? It's all about the way the speech is made. Expressive means make our words richer, poems more expressive, prose more interesting. It is impossible to clearly convey thoughts without the use of special lexical figures, because the speech will sound poor and ugly.

Let's figure out what are the means of expressiveness of the Russian language and where to find them.

Perhaps at school you wrote essays poorly: the text “didn’t go”, the words were chosen with difficulty, and it was generally unrealistic to finish the presentation with a clear thought. The fact is that the necessary syntactic means are laid in the head with the reading of books. However, only they are not enough to write interesting, colorful and easy. You need to develop your skills through practice.

Just compare the next two columns. On the left - text without means of expression or with a minimum of them. On the right is rich text. These are often found in the literature.

It would seem that three banal sentences, but how interesting they can be painted! The expressive means of language help the viewer to see the picture that you are trying to describe. Using them is an art, but it is not difficult to master it. It is enough to read a lot and pay attention to interesting techniques used by the author.

For example, in the paragraph of text on the right, epithets are used, thanks to which the subject instantly appears bright and unusual. What will the reader remember better - an ordinary cat or a fat commander cat? Rest assured that the second option will probably be more to your liking. Yes, and there will be no such embarrassment that in the middle of the text the cat will suddenly be white, but the reader has long imagined him as gray!

So, syntactic means are special techniques artistic expressiveness that prove, justify, draw information, and engage the imagination of the reader or listener. This is extremely important not only for written, but also for oral speech. Especially if the speech or text is composed in . However, both there and there means of expression in the Russian language should be in moderation. Do not oversaturate the reader or listener with them, otherwise he will quickly get tired of making his way through such a "jungle".

Existing means of expression

There are a lot of such special techniques, and it is unlikely that you know everything about them. To begin with, you do not need to use all the means of expression at once - this makes speech difficult. You need to use them in moderation, but do not be stingy. Then you will achieve the desired effect.

Traditionally, they are divided into several groups:

  • phonetic - most often found in poems;
  • lexical (tropes);
  • stylistic figures.

Let's try to deal with them in order. And to make it more convenient for you, after the explanation, all the expressive means of the language are presented in convenient tablets - you can print it out and hang it on the wall to reread it from time to time. That way you can learn them unobtrusively.

Phonetic tricks

The most common phonetic devices are alliteration and assonance. They differ only in that consonants are repeated in the first case, vowels are repeated in the second.

This technique is very convenient to use in poems when there are few words, but you need to convey the atmosphere. Yes, and poetry is most often read aloud, and assonance or alliteration helps to “see” the picture.

Suppose we need to describe a swamp. Rustling reeds grow in the swamp. The beginning of the line is ready - the reeds rustle. We can already hear this sound, but it's not enough to complete the picture.

Do you hear, as if silently rustling and hissing reeds? Now we can feel this atmosphere. This technique is called alliteration - consonants are repeated.

Similarly, with assonance, the repetition of vowels. This one is a little easier. For example: I hear a spring thunderstorm, then I fall silent, then I sing. By this, the author conveys a lyrical mood and spring sadness. The effect is achieved through the skillful use of vowels. In explaining what assonance is, the table will help.

Lexical devices (tropes)

Lexical devices are used much more often than other means of expression. The fact is that often people use them unconsciously. For example, we can say that our heart is lonely. But the heart, in fact, cannot be lonely, it is just an epithet, a means of expression. However, such expressions help to emphasize the deep meaning of what was said.

The main lexical devices include the following tropes:

  • epithet;
  • comparison as a means of expressive speech;
  • metaphor;
  • metonymy;
  • irony;
  • hyperbole and litote.

Sometimes we use these lexical units unconsciously. For example, comparison slips in everyone's speech - this means of expression has firmly entered into everyday life so you need to use it wisely.

Metaphor is more interesting shape comparisons, because we do not compare slow death with cigarettes, using the word "as if". We already understand that slow death is a cigarette. Or, for example, the expression "dry clouds". Most likely, this means that it has not rained for a long time. The epithet and metaphor often overlap, so it is important not to confuse them when analyzing a text.

Hyperbole and litote are exaggeration and understatement, respectively. For example, the expression “the sun has absorbed the power of a hundred fires” is a clear hyperbole. And “quietly, quieter than a stream” is a litote. These phenomena are also firmly embedded in everyday life.

Metonymy and paraphrase interesting phenomena. Metonymy is an abbreviation of what is said. For example, there is no need to speak of Chekhov's books as "the books that Chekhov wrote." You can use the expression "Chekhov's books", and this will be a metonymy.

A paraphrase is a deliberate replacement of concepts with synonymous ones in order to avoid tautologies in the text.

Although, with proper skill, tautology can also be a means of expression!

Also to lexical means expressiveness in speech include:

  • archaisms (outdated vocabulary);
  • historicisms (lexicon related to a specific historical period);
  • neologisms (new vocabulary);
  • phraseological units;
  • dialectisms, jargon, aphorisms.
means of expressionDefinitionExample and explanation
EpithetA definition that helps add color to an image. Often used figuratively.Bloody sky. (Speaks of the sunrise.)
Comparison as a means of expressive speechComparison of objects with each other. They may not be related, but even vice versa.Means of expression, like expensive jewelry, exalt our speech.
Metaphor"Hidden comparison" or figurative. More complex than a simple comparison, comparative conjunctions are not used.Seething anger. (Man gets angry).
Sleepy city. (Morning city, which has not yet woken up).
MetonymySubstituting words to shorten a clear sentence or avoid tautology.I read Chekhov's books (and not "I read books by Chekhov's authorship").
IronyAn expression with the opposite meaning. A hidden laugh.You are a genius, of course!
(Ironically, here "genius" is used in the sense of "stupid").
HyperbolaDeliberate exaggeration.Brighter than a thousand lightning bolts. (Dazzling, bright show).
LitotesDeliberate reduction of what was said.Weak as a mosquito.
paraphraseSubstitution of words in order to avoid tautology. The replacement can only be a related word.The house is a hut on chicken legs, the lion is the king of animals, etc.
AllegoryAn abstract concept that helps to reveal the image. Most often - an established designation.A fox in the meaning of cunning, a wolf in the meaning of strength and rudeness, a turtle in the meaning of slowness or wisdom.
personificationThe transfer of properties and feelings of a living object to an inanimate one.The lantern seemed to sway on a long thin leg - it reminded me of a boxer preparing for a swift attack.

Stylistic figures

Stylistic figures often contain special grammatical constructions. The most commonly used include:

  • anaphora and epiphora;
  • compositional joint;
  • antithesis;
  • oxymoron or paradox;
  • inversion;
  • parceling;
  • ellipsis;
  • rhetorical questions, exclamations, appeals;
  • asyndeton.

Anaphora and epiphora are often referred to as phonetic techniques, but this is an erroneous assumption. Such methods of artistic expression are pure stylistics. Anaphora - the same beginning of several lines, epiphora - the same endings. Most often used in poetry, sometimes in prose, to emphasize the drama and growing anxiety, or to enhance the poetry of the moment.

The compositional junction is a deliberate "building up" of the conflict. The word is used at the end of one sentence and at the beginning of the next. It gave me everything, the word. The Word helped me become who I am. This technique is called a compositional joint.

Antithesis is the opposition of two antipodes: yesterday and today, night and day, death and life. Of the interesting techniques, one can note the parcelling, which is used to increase the conflict and change the pace of the story, as well as the ellipsis - the omission of a sentence member. Often used in exclamations, calls.

means of expressionDefinitionExample and explanation
AnaphoraThe same beginning of several lines.Let's join hands, brothers. Let's join hands and unite our hearts. Let's take up swords to end the war.
EpiphoraSame ending for multiple lines.I wash it wrong! I look wrong! All wrong!
Composite jointOne sentence ends with this word, and the second sentence begins with it.I didn't know what to do. To do in order to survive in this storm.
AntithesisoppositionI revived with every second, but after that I died every evening.
(Used to show drama).
OxymoronUse of concepts that contradict each other.Hot ice, peaceful war.
ParadoxAn expression that does not have a direct meaning, but carries an aesthetic meaning.The dead man's hot hands were more alive than all the others. Hurry up as slowly as you can.
InversionIntentional rearrangement of words in a sentence.I was sad that night, I was afraid of everything in this world.
ParcelingBreaking words into separate sentences.He waited. Again. Stooping, weeping.
EllipsisIntentional omission.Go ahead, get to work! (Missed the word "take").
gradationIncrease in expression, the use of synonyms according to the degree of increase.His eyes, cold, unfeeling, dead, expressed nothing.
(Used to show drama).

Features of the use of means of expression

We should not forget that gestures are also used in oral Russian speech. Sometimes they are more eloquent conventional means expressiveness, but - in the skillful combination of these figures. Then the role will turn out to be lively, rich and bright.

Do not try to insert as many stylistic or lexical figures into speech as possible. It won't make the word richer, but it will make you feel like you've "put on" too much jewelry and become uninteresting. Means of expression - like a skillfully selected accessory. It happens that you don’t even notice it right away, it is so harmoniously intertwined in a sentence with other words.



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